Storm Posted September 10, 2013 Share Posted September 10, 2013 Don't be afraid to critique. Seriously. Torso piece I did with Charcoal. Trust me, looks much better in the picture than it is in real life... Trying to do a charcoal practice drawing on the Zinogre. Sheesh, it's been a while since I've worked with charcoal, I feel rusty... Gesture practice. I think it's alright, but I'm sure the better artists here see the flaws. Imageshack keeps saying the file is too big to upload whenever I try to fix the orientation, so sorry... I did this today. Done on Colors 3D, never finished, but I think at this point it's still easy to tell what I was doing wrong or right. I think the face is pretty okay, I think the body is where the trouble started. I did this one a few weeks ago. This is a body drawing. I always get the feeling that my leg muscles are lacking... (both in real life and in drawing, I can barely run a lap...) This is my cat. Well, what do you guys think? Where can I make improvements? Please don't just give me compliments or insults. I can't really get better if people don't tell me what they like or don't like! Old drawings for original Art of a Wannabe (2011) thread: http://oi56.tinypic.com/vp89av.jpg http://oi54.tinypic.com/2dv5ymb.jpg http://oi53.tinypic.com/11i213n.jpg http://oi52.tinypic.com/otki0z.jpg Ah the nostalgia... More stuff to be posted within 1 to 3 days. Edit: Dear god, I forgot to finish the damn topic title! It was supposed to be: Art of a Wannabe 2: The Uncalled Sequel Edit: Thank you, Mellow! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tell-Tale Heart Posted September 10, 2013 Share Posted September 10, 2013 The torso piece is very impressive! And I do really like the face on the Colors one. You've really improved on your faces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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